We are

… and have kissed my way through your resolve not to be loved. We are. We are more than a moment or the last moment with all the moments in between. Could I set in stone a desire and place it upon your finger. What routine action would such a display accomplish that cannot be known by the beating of my heart. They are in rhythm as one and when we concentrate on that unity all else fades. Nothing matters as we silence the world for a moment. A shared moment of knowing that we exist together, even if the world doesn’t see us. Our hearts see each other and reaffirm one fact of life. We are.

-OM

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26 thoughts on “We are

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  2. Aaawe… my favourite line?
    ‘Could I set in stone a desire and place it upon your finger.’
    The sentiment is beautiful in the WHOLE piece – but that line pulls it so nicely together…
    Pity about the missing question mark ๐Ÿ˜›
    (hey – you always complain that you never get criticised to help you improve. I miss Nav – he always used to correct my spelling and grammar … :/ )
    But then you did say it was a little rough… But I am in critique mood today so…

    ‘Nothing matters as we silence the world for a moment. A shared moment of knowing that we exist together, even if the world doesnโ€™t see us. Our hearts see each other and reaffirm one fact of life. We are.’

    Would it perhaps be better like this?

    ‘Nothing matters as we silence the world for a moment, a shared moment of knowing that we exist together. Even if the world doesnโ€™t see us, our hearts see each other and reaffirm one fact of life – We are.’

    (not sure about the dash thingy – HW would know better ๐Ÿ˜› )

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